Fantasy Unit Reflection

During the fantasy writing unit I liked the writing pieces that we got to do. After looking through my work I will keep in mind to put good punctuation in my pieces instead of doing a paragraph long sentence. Something I can improve on is my concentration because I get easily distracted by the smallest the like a pencil falling or a tap on a desk. My work shows that I improved my punctuation because in my first piece I didn't put many periods or commas.